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The broken day

Justin E. H. Smith delivers a surreal, claustrophobic meditation on cultural stagnation that bypasses the usual noise of online discourse to expose the hollow core of modern isolation. Rather than dissecting the latest viral outrage, Smith constructs a narrative where the internet is not a global village but a sealed attic, forcing the reader to confront the terrifying banality of a life suspended in time. This is not a review of current events; it is a diagnosis of a society that has stopped moving forward while pretending to travel.

The Architecture of Stasis

The piece opens with a jarring admission of the narrator's confinement, immediately dismantling the expectation of a standard cultural critique. "I admit this isn't quite what I thought it was going to be when I applied for the position," Smith writes, setting a tone of resigned irony that permeates the entire text. The narrator, a culture critic who has not left his house in 36 years, finds himself surrounded by the detritus of a bygone era: Reader's Digest condensations, commemorative plates from the Woodland chapter of the Order of the Eastern Star, and boxes of toys that seem to exist outside of linear time. Smith uses these artifacts to argue that our collective cultural memory has become a hoard of unprocessed nostalgia.

The broken day

The narrator's inventory of the attic serves as a metaphor for the internet itself—a place where everything is preserved but nothing is lived. "The truth is what I mostly know is the inside of this house, especially the attic, where I spend most of my time rummaging through the contents of these old cardboard boxes," Smith observes. This framing is effective because it literalizes the digital experience of scrolling through endless archives without ever engaging with the present. The inclusion of specific, dated items like the "1983" Grand Matrons plates grounds the surrealism in a tangible, decaying reality.

The boarders are downstairs watching television. There is a commercial on for Progresso soup that seems to be targeting the elderly and isolated: "Progresso Soup: It Helps Break Up the Day."

Smith's choice to have the narrator interact with a commercial slogan about "breaking up the day" while living in a state of permanent suspension is a masterstroke of irony. It highlights the disconnect between the marketed promise of connection and the actual experience of isolation. Critics might argue that this portrayal of isolation is too extreme to be relatable, but the piece succeeds precisely because it exaggerates the feeling of being trapped in a loop of consumption and memory.

The Illusion of Movement

The narrative takes a sharp turn when the narrator is whisked away to France for an onboarding trip, a journey that is described with a dreamlike, almost hallucinatory quality. Smith uses this section to critique the performative nature of travel and cultural engagement in the modern age. The narrator's trip to Paris is not a genuine exploration but a curated experience orchestrated by his editor, Hélène Le Goff. "It was such an incredible trip," the narrator claims, yet the details reveal a disconnect from reality. He wanders through the Marais, observing the "strangely placed apostrophes" in shop names, and stumbles upon a literary launch party that feels more like a simulation than a real event.

At the party, the narrator encounters a figure named Kyle, who represents the ambitious, hollow face of the literary world. "This Kyle is absolutely magnanimous, and this big-city literary event is the real thing… at least as far as I know," Smith writes, injecting a note of uncertainty that undermines the entire scene. The narrator overhears conversations about Gaza, Donetsk, and the Vélodrome d'Hiver, but these serious topics are treated with the same casual detachment as the debate over which metro line is "haunted." This juxtaposition serves to highlight the trivialization of historical and contemporary tragedies in the face of cultural narcissism.

The reference to the Vélodrome d'Hiver, where thousands of Jews were rounded up in 1942, is particularly striking. Smith drops this historical fact into a conversation about metro lines and fashion, creating a jarring dissonance that forces the reader to confront the erasure of history in contemporary discourse. "The Jews rounded up at the Vélodrome d'hiver," the narrator notes, as if it were just another item on a list of topics to be discussed and discarded. This is a powerful critique of how we consume news and history in the digital age—flattening profound suffering into mere content.

I hover past conversations concerning Gaza, Donetsk, and many other things I don't understand: Laurent Mauvignier, Quentin Meillassoux, the ongoing Prime Ministerial musical chairs in this country's politics, the assassination of Dulcie September, the Algerians felled into the Seine, the Jews rounded up at the Vélodrome d'hiver.

The narrator's inability to understand these conversations underscores the theme of alienation. He is physically present but mentally absent, a spectator in a world he no longer inhabits. Smith's portrayal of the "posthuman black costumes" and the "tired" revelers further emphasizes the exhaustion of a culture that has lost its vitality. The scene is a ghost story, not of the supernatural, but of a society that has become a shadow of its former self.

The Return to the Attic

The climax of the piece is the narrator's reunion with his old friend, JSR, who has become his boss. This encounter is fraught with unspoken history and unresolved tension. "He had once been my best friend, after all, and he was about to become my boss, in a manner of speaking," Smith writes, capturing the awkwardness of their dynamic. The narrator recalls their childhood games, where he was rolled down a hill in a tire, a metaphor for his subservient role in their relationship. This memory serves to illustrate the cyclical nature of their interaction, suggesting that the narrator has always been the passive observer, the one who is rolled along by the will of others.

The reunion is brief and anticlimactic. They do not speak, but the narrator feels a sense of familiarity, a return to an old frame of mind. "I was ready to get back into the tire again," Smith writes, a line that encapsulates the narrator's resignation to his role. The piece ends with the narrator back in his attic, surrounded by the same boxes and tapes, listening to a commercial for Progresso soup. The cycle is complete, and the narrator is once again trapped in his own world.

I know I was supposed to be writing about "culture", but Hélène has given me the green light, so I may as well just continue on what is plainly the only real beat I'll ever have.

This final admission is the most poignant moment in the piece. The narrator accepts his confinement, recognizing that his only authentic voice is the one that speaks from the attic. Smith's decision to end the piece on this note of acceptance is a bold move, suggesting that the only way to navigate a broken world is to acknowledge its brokenness and find meaning in the small, mundane details of existence.

Bottom Line

Justin E. H. Smith's "The broken day" is a haunting exploration of isolation, nostalgia, and the failure of modern culture to provide genuine connection. Its greatest strength lies in its ability to blend the surreal with the mundane, creating a narrative that feels both fantastical and deeply real. The piece's vulnerability is its reliance on a narrator who is so detached from reality that it risks alienating readers who seek a more direct engagement with the world. However, this detachment is precisely the point: in a world that feels increasingly broken, the only honest response may be to retreat into the attic and listen to the old songs. The reader should watch for how this theme of isolation evolves in Smith's future work, as it clearly resonates with the broader cultural mood of our time.

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  • Vélodrome d'Hiver

    The article mentions 'the Jews rounded up at the Vélodrome d'hiver' - referring to the Vel' d'Hiv Roundup of July 1942, when French police arrested over 13,000 Jews for deportation to Nazi death camps. This was one of the largest mass arrests of Jews in France and represents a dark chapter of French collaboration that many readers may not know in detail.

  • Order of the Eastern Star

    The narrator discovers commemorative plates from the 'Woodland chapter of the Order of the Eastern Star' with names inscribed along a pentagram. This Masonic-affiliated fraternal organization, open to both men and women, has an interesting history dating to the mid-19th century and uses symbolic rituals that would provide educational context for the article's themes of Americana and nostalgia.

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The broken day

by Justin E. H. Smith · Hinternet · Read full article

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Hi, I’m Rawn. I’m honored today to be able to share my inaugural piece as The Hinternet’s new culture critic.

I admit this isn’t quite what I thought it was going to be when I applied for the position. You see, I spend an awful lot of time on the internet, just like all of you reading this, to the extent that at this point I have trouble hearing “culture” at all without “reaching for my revolver”, so to speak, which is to say without mentally adding a “wars” to the end. I thought they were recruiting me to share speculations about J.D. Vance’s Illuminati ring, or lists of the many ways Taylor Swift aids and abets white supremacy, or gleeful dissection of an Epstein e-mail seeming to hint at a history of sodomitic trysts between old Bubba Clinton and our current sitting president. But of course I should have known: this is JSR’s project, after all, and he would never wish to descend into such dirty business as that. So, instead of culture wars, upon being hired Managing Editor Hélène Le Goff asked me whether I might be willing to cover the novels shortlisted for this year’s Prix Goncourt.

“This year’s pre-what now?” I asked, and she could see I had no idea what she was talking about. She froze for a second, visibly winced, and then hissed at me: “Just write what you know.”

I’m happy to comply. The truth is what I mostly know is the inside of this house, especially the attic, where I spend most of my time rummaging through the contents of these old cardboard boxes: the shoehorn collections; the Reader’s Digest condensed large-print editions of Rob Roy, Anne of Green Gables, The Three Musketeers; Edgar Cayce Speaks, Vincent Bugliosi’s Helter-Skelter, Alvin Toffler’s Future Shock; commemorative plates from annual gatherings of the Woodland chapter of the Order of the Eastern Star, with the names of the Grand Matrons inscribed along the edges of a pentagram: “Patty, Bunny, Edna, Viv, Maureen. 1983.”

Downstairs the boarders remain slumped on the couch, all light dimmed by Minions bedsheets adapted into makeshift curtains, both virtually immobilized by their weight, fixed permanently on Fox News, eating TV dinners. “Remember ...